Revised Introduction

Let us think about it: If Benjamin Franklin never exists in American history, how America will difference from now?

Wevmaybe don’t have lightning rod, then we can’t protect buildings and ships from lightning damage.

The political system of the United States will have huge difference from now.

We can’t have the great book like 《Poor Richard’s Almanac》.

So we can say Benjamin Franklin got great success as an inventor, politician, and writer.

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One Response to “Revised Introduction”

  1. All you did was remove “If Benjamin Franklin never exists”. The thesis statement isn’t very strong. And the answers to your questions are pretty weak, as well. We will work on it!

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